Thursday, October 21, 2010

Our society and many others should take this argument into consideration. Taking pride in yourself and waiting to have sex with someone you actually care about is a luxury in the country we live in. Many others don’t get to experience this luxury due to arranged marriages and things of the sort. But we as a society have exploited sex and those who treasure it and want to save themselves for someone they love are more few and far between. Many of us have heard the stories of the children in elementary school getting caught having sex on the playground. How would you like to be that parent getting that phone call from the school? In my own personal experience when my younger brother was a freshman he told me that if you went to the freshman building and you were a guy that hadn’t lost your v-card yet it wasn’t possible to be cool. Sadly it seems as if our society is turning boys in to players, pimps, and man whores. But how can we turn it around and make them realize that it is the actions they take that define them for the rest of their lives? And is it really that important to try to grow up so fast?

This is the part of my paper I think I need to develop more. I think I might even change my thesis a little more to help the paper flow better. Let me know what you guys think!

3 comments:

  1. Indeed it has become a luxury that not many will experience. Your idea is coming across clearly and your example with your brother fits in perfectly. If you want to develop it a little more perhaps you could add statistics about age vs. virginity from a valid resource?

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  2. That's a good point, it really makes you think about it.

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  3. Yea it's just a tricky subject to find decent articles on there are millions of newspaper ones but are they credible sources?

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